Kia ora Maanas, Thanks for completing another activity! Ka pai! For this task you are required to post the pics of three teams that have the silver fern on their team name and then tell us which one you like the most. I feel that you didn't quite hit the mark here because when you explain your reasons you wrote " ...and good at the same time/", what do you mean by that? Could you explain it more specifically? For example, in my opinion I agree with you as I also like the Silver Ferns uniform because it is a bit more feminine whilst practical and the fern in front of the skirt that gradually changes colour adds such an original touch. Do you see how I did explained my reasons why I like it the most? In order for you to gain full points for this activity I will need you to hoop back and write a bit more about your reasons to like the Silver Ferns uniform. Do you think you can do that and let me know? You are doing well, keep up and be amazing! Kia kaha, Patricia
Kia ora Maanas,
ReplyDeleteThanks for completing another activity! Ka pai!
For this task you are required to post the pics of three teams that have the silver fern on their team name and then tell us which one you like the most. I feel that you didn't quite hit the mark here because when you explain your reasons you wrote " ...and good at the same time/", what do you mean by that? Could you explain it more specifically? For example, in my opinion I agree with you as I also like the Silver Ferns uniform because it is a bit more feminine whilst practical and the fern in front of the skirt that gradually changes colour adds such an original touch. Do you see how I did explained my reasons why I like it the most?
In order for you to gain full points for this activity I will need you to hoop back and write a bit more about your reasons to like the Silver Ferns uniform. Do you think you can do that and let me know?
You are doing well, keep up and be amazing!
Kia kaha,
Patricia